Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Sea Folk (preview)

Sea Folk Preview Preface & Chapter 1
(sadly, I have no idea where this story is going to take me. I know the beginning but not the ending.)
(And this isn't quite perfect yet so feel free to point out errors!)
PREFACE

Beneath the surface of the wide vast ocean, there is life that thrives in the nurturing waters. Though the way is harsh, life gives way to death and death feeds new life.
Sometimes those who are not of the sea, come to hunt the bounty of life, but sometimes they’re motives are darker than others.

CHAPTER ONE
Brill

            Brill struggled with the fishing nets, her arms too weak to move the heavy netting. She tugged and pulled but no amount of strength would get the nets out of the water. She lightly climbed off the jagged rocks and into the water. She soon found the source of the problem; a loop of the netting had caught on a rock and was holding it fast. She frowned and produced a knife carved from granite.
            She found the knife from an abandoned ship; it had seemed the humans were attacked by their own kind – the kind that sailed with the black flag marked with bones. Brill thought of her last knife as she cut the ropes. It had been made of a shiny sharp rock, but it had rusted so easily in the water. She’d been disappointed when it snapped from the rust; it had been so pretty.
            As she hacked at the seaweed rope, the water behind her bubbled and a man with red-ish blonde hair rose out of the water, his waist down still submerged. He laughed heartily as Brill struggled with the rope; his dark green eyes twinkling. Brill jumped at his laughter and lost her footing. He reached out and caught her before she touched the water.
            “Lovemate, you’re doing this all wrong.” he held her until she got her footing back. He nodded to the frayed net, “You need to get between the rope and rock.” he took the knife and slipped it between the caught loops and rock and jerked hard. The loop popped loose and the net floated freely in the water.
            Brill stuck her tongue out at him and then laughed, “Redfin, what are you going here?”
            “Well my dear, I came to inform you that your lovely mother would like your presence.” he did a bad imitation of her nanny and then laughed again. Brill laughed lightly. “Very well then, take the nets for me and I’ll be there soon.”
            “Don’t take too long!” he did another imitation, “She doesn’t like your daydreaming.” he grabbed the nets and then disappeared under the water with a flick of his orange and red Koi patterned fin.
Brill sighed deeply once he was gone. She climbed back up on the rocks and looked out towards the sea. The setting sun made the water glow like fire, gently licking the sides of the rock she sat on. It reminded her of her first time surfacing; she had risen from the water just as the sun was setting, and she thought it was the most beautiful sight.  
The whole sky had looked like gold, while violet and rose-colored clouds, which she could not describe, floated over her; and, still more rapidly than the clouds, flew a large flock of wild swans towards the setting sun, looking like a long white veil across the sea. She had tried to swim towards the sun; but it sunk into the waves, and the rosy tints faded from the clouds and from the sea.
Brill’s second time surfacing; she had seen far off ships, looking like giant sea gulls floating on the water. Ever since then, she’d been fascinated by the funny looking Elves that her people called Landers. Night fell quickly, the waters getting rough as the moon rose to replace the sun.
Brill let herself slide into the water, her powerful legs and webbed feet propelling her through the waters. She dived under the uneven surface and the gills around her ribs opened, allowing her to breathe the salty water. As she swam, a giant shadow passed over her, and something moved the water to send her rushing forward. Panicking, she dropped down even lower and spun onto her back, floating to see the hull of a lengthy ship slicing the water above her.
A Landers ship!
With excited curiosity Brill swam along the side of the ship, hoping to get a glance at the Landers. She leapt up and grabbed a low outer beam. Brill pulled herself up and looked up to see the strange creatures rushing about the wooden deck.
They wore strange clothing; nothing like the shells and seaweed her people wore. They wore things on their feet that thumped the wood when they walked, and bands on their heads, similar to the coral crown the queen wore. They had strange instruments that made alien sounds, but the sound wasn’t bad she thought, it sounded just as nice as the singing clams down on the ocean floor.
Brill smiled widely, watching them roam and move oddly. They moved in a way unknown to her; they jumped and kicked out their legs, moving in time with the weird music. She nodded her head to the music, completely loosing herself in the music until the water below her bubbled and a fishing net quite similar to her own burst out of the water. It rose, filled with fish and the Landers above her pulled and shouted out, “Heave! Heave! Heave!”
Brill watched it rise and watched the men pull the rope mesh out of the water; their muscles bunching and straining. To her horror, a sea turtle was entangled in the nets. Brill understood their need for fish but not the sea turtle. Unthinking, she jumped from her spot on the side of the ship and onto the net. The men faltered with their pulling. A man rushed to the edge.
Between and jerk, she thought, copying what Redfin had shown her earlier. She slipped her knife between the sea turtle’s shell and the rope and jerked up. The knife severed the net, dropping the fish and the sea turtle back into the water.
“There’s a girl down there!” the man yelled. Brill looked up at him startled; her brown hair falling away from her face, displaying her turquoise eyes; bright as the sea on a sunny day.
He froze when he saw her. Brill stared at him, studying his features, while his own brown eyes drifted over her body, his eyes lingering over her finned feet and the fins protruding from her calves. His short black hair curled softly around his face and his skin lightly tanned from the sun. The Lander, the very handsome Lander reached out to her with a strong hand.
She felt an odd attraction to him. Instead of being repulsed, she wanted to take his strange un-webbed hand and have him touch her. Brill put her hand out to him slowly, memorizing his face in awe.
 Thumping of boots broke her reverie as the men approached the side of the boat. Brill quickly dived down into the water, her heart pounding; that was the closest she’d ever gotten to a Lander. She floated just below the surface, watching as other men joined the handsome Lander.
“There was a girl!” he cried. The other men gave him a strange look as they searched the water.
“Aye lad. Of course there was. You’d better go sit down and rest a bit. The sea air must be getting to you.” he chuckled with a couple of the other men.
MORE TO COME
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